The set of images on the top is the first draft of my two-page article. The set of images on the bottom is the final revision of my two-page article. They were both made within Canva. Both versions of the article make use of a background image that is set in the outdoors. The openness of these images help to evoke feelings of quiet, peace, and tranquility. Both images were found through Canva. I thought the final image I used in the final revision fit the theme of the article better, since the person pictured is practicing meditation, one of the ways listed that can be used to help manage stress. Both versions of the article contain the same information within the text. However, the layout is different between both of them. For the first draft, The only piece of text on the left page is the title of the magazine itself. The rest of the information is on the right page. For the final revision, The title of the article is spread out across both pages, and both sections of the article itself are spread out amongst the two pages. The introductory paragraph is on the left page while the list is on the right.
For the list section of the article, the numbers on each activity were removed to make it feel less cluttered. The text overall has been made larger to make it easier to read, especially since it is against the background image instead of a plain white page. The layout of each item on the list has also been changed. They are more evenly aligned in the final version to make it look cleaner and more organized. The list in the first draft looked scattered, making it a bit more difficult to read. The changes made make the final revision easier to read, as well as more pleasing to the eye.
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